Hello there everyone.

As the title says, I'm not good, or even half-decent at replay making. I just thought I'd post one of the best replays (In my opinion) that I have, and see what I'm doing wrong.

Decided to post 2 of them. These are really all I can do atm. CnC is appreciated, and welcomed.

Thanks!

Edit 4 -
The opener was boring, try to make a opener that leads to something fancy or destructive.
The split was okay. The spin thing could have been really cool if you aimed it right and got a bitch ton more dm's.

IDK3 -

Opener was better but still boring. Try not to wibble wobble or twitch (frame 335) , don't contract right after something is extending. The last part was pretty cool , could have gotten something better potentially if you worked on it.

Here's a WIP. CnC pls

Thanks Chaco <3

I know about ghosting. I'm trying to just work on my flow right now. Not focusing on making a flawless replay.

Here's an updated version I did an hour or two ago.