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That was really good :o

Flow throughout the replay was pretty good with the exception of the little bit while you spun around to get Uke, which kinda messed up because you grabbed too long. Kinda odd how you only got one DM with that kick, but okay. Should have tried for a bigger hit. Last bit was slightly stiff, but otherwise pretty good. Pose was cool, too.

'Kay, cnc mine. Haven't got any yet :c
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It's twitchy, I'll give you that.

Twitchy left leg at the start, paused before the launch. Leg twitched after the launch then you were stiff getting his torso, though the hit was decent. Your attempt at a throw was meh, you should have gone for a full swing of your arm if you wanted to throw it. The last DM was made in a rather awkward position. Twitchy getting to the pose ;o

Try leaving your joints in a relaxed or held state rather than a contracted/extended state unless you really have to, might help a little.
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I'm not entirely sure how I managed to make this replay, but I know I'll never make anything like it again, cuz I suck at making replays
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[03:39] <idabosswiz> can't you just set up a pass for ddos?
The starting was decent I guess, but then it got kinda floppy and stiff at the same time.
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Eh, maybe I should stick to making art, since I'm much more fond of that.

Some simple logo I made up in my spare time:

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Last edited by Albus; Nov 21, 2013 at 10:49 PM.
[03:39] <idabosswiz> can't you just set up a pass for ddos?
Do me one pl0x


I suck at art so i'll only cnc the replays.

!Dat--[M]--Cookies:
I love the opener, it had a lot of flow and style.
You went pretty stiff after the first hit and the arm dm was just random.
The hit at 232 was verry nice and the hit at 205 was verry good as well.
You grabed about 11 frames to early when you grabbed the legs thought, however the last hit was SICK.

i would say this is about 7/10


_6Awesome:
As skip said, your leggs was kinda twitchy in the start.
The first and second hits were pretty good but i think you should try to add 1 more dm to the last hit.
By the way, i think a lower gravity would fit you better


#R-Spinny:
Everything untill 320 was really good.
I think you should edit everything that comes after 320, this start have big potencial.



00-- Spar:
The run was pretty stiff.
Try to use more relax, train your balance and you will become an awesome sparer.