Cool opener, I think you could have done a lot more with that spin without having to grab him though.
I thought it was a very wierd choice to grab his shoulder, since you reversed the spin completely after that. Grabbing something that had been dismembered in the first kick would have forced you to replace the grab which would have been a much better option.
Crotch kick is pretty solid, well aimed and everything, but it only really paid off when you finally switched the grab. Just a shame that you decided to go for a regular kick instead of doing something interesting with it.

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bump

Come on nowwwww.

Overall I thought it was good, the opener was a bid odd but it was nice. After that it was just fun to watch. 8/10

opener what?
Continued nicely anyways, love everything from 875 to 735.
I like the quick transition to the chest boom but I was hoping for something more creative with the torso.
Maybe slam it into the ground or something, for now it's a meh opener and wow-ish two kicks and then meh again.

I'm not very good.

I liked it overall however the little movement at the start of the manip for me was a turn off I liked it overall nice dm's

Honestly, I thought that the frontflip and how you stepped on uke's foot looked super super stylish, amazing job.
Now what happened next ruined the replay. You both were in midair, and you had to keep the same grab for the whole thing, otherwise uke would have pissed off instantly. It's not your fault, it's just that there was no other option, which kinda sucks.

11\2 I liked the movements and flow overall I just really liked it