Try to avoid having the camera go through the tori's body.
Also, you messed up the transition at 32 seconds.
Too much slowmotion for me, and again same shader ;_;
Change shader next time ?
Other than that is good so 8/10
You use the same boring shader in all of your videos.
Have some variation.
I agree with Tet and Muun, you should try using other shaders.
I found that the music was okay, seemed to fit the vid decently.
Didn't really like the transition into the tori much imo.
Other than that it was pretty decent. 7/10 I suppose
i think you're all annoying
sly uses the same color scheme with every single video and its ok with you then
shader --> inverted.inc
don't like the music, don't like the pace
Its true sly uses the same shaders, but he does different things that doesn't make the shaders stand out as much, in fact, he does things that has us ignore those shaders. I think if you aren't able to draw our attention from the shader, then have some variety in the background.