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[VID] The Shaolin School - Generations
Hello community !

Finally the last version



Soft used : Sony vegas pro, fraps

Musics : Kodo Japanese drums
AudaciDesing - Opera

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

Good Video Mocu, i really enjoyed watching it.

For me just a perfect art to show the movement in motion. =)
I loved that you showed some Tao-Lu. Some of them were really good, and some below par. Overall, hopefully that'll encourage more people to imitate real-life forms! Technically, one of your dullest videos in my opinion. But that was bound to happen when your video is so long. Keep on rocking. <3
Your messed up world enthrills me
The long awaited should have a vote on what video was the best for each month and i would vote this one for about a year
Good replays, amazing camera work, and good editing with the punches and movements of the limbs literally i can't say anything that would hurt this video because there isn't anything i hated. I was entertained the whole way through keep it up!
Only If I Could Suplex

Thanks guys <3

Indeed, it is a fairly linear video in its structure. It was voluntary, it is the style of my videos Shaolin School after all ;)
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Originally Posted by Obediah View Post
Great work Mocucha. I'm sorry I couldn't get that second replay to you ;-;...I tried everything that I could. I didn't feel much of the story behind it, but it still looked great.

Yeah, you can send me the replay where you win but not the one where I win, what is happening dude ? :/

You don't felle much of the story ? Could you show me where you see a bit of story in it ?
Last edited by Mocucha; Sep 28, 2013 at 11:25 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

Originally Posted by Lane View Post
I didn't really enjoy this video.

There was absolutely zero sync, and using the same noises over and over again got pretty old really fast. The brownish CC didn't fit the shaders or the toris whatsoever. The camerawork was pretty mediocre, in my opinion. You kinda just moved in a single direction at the same distance from the toris the entire time. The transitions weren't great either, and again, got old really fast. I don't think you really put any effort in making the speed of the replays match the tempo of the songs at all. The whole 'old LCD tv lines' effect doesn't really fit or work very well in the video either.

In my opinion, your style is pretty dull and you haven't improved very much in the past couple years.


Absolut zero sync ? I am sorry, I can't agree with that.

The camera work is exactly how I wanted it, like in a fighting video game, always on the side. You can don't like it, I can understand it, but it's intentional. Same for transitions and tempo of replays too btw.

If you don't see difference between this shaolin school video and the older one, I think you are a bit blind.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

tbh. the sync is hardly there
for a lot, if not most viewers, they only see sync when you emphasize it
i wouldnt have noticed it if the sfx you added wasn't there. there's no way to visually catch all the sync without watching it twice or three times
you still havent grasped that flow is good to have in your video, and to have flow you have to go from replay to replay smoothly.
fading in and out is THE laziest way to provide a transition and i feel like everyone should stop it

the freecam would be okay if it wasn't for such a boring color scheme and cc, you know? (the overlays were also really cheesy and it ruined it even more for me)
the music in this video is SO boring, it may be my opinion, but i often skipped around because it didn't keep my attention through the whole video. to top it off, you branded these replays as "some of the best flows in Toribash", yet there were some a lot of replays i didnt think were fit to be in a video like this (as far as viewcount goes, not editing).

sorry, i dont like this.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Before starting the video, I already knew points that some people don't like, but anyway, it is my style and I prefer a video that some people call boring than an over edited one ;) (i know now this game is full of ragers, so dont make me lie : I dont say over edited videos are bad, I just dont like them). I really like the video how it is. I do them first to watch them, not to being most casual as possible.

For the music, its only tastes, I love that music, I love how it is repetitive but go high in crescendo.

For the quality of flows, indeed there are different level of masteries, it is the deal since the first shaolin school, thats why I said some of the best.... ;)

Anyway, thanks for your constructive criticism.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

The fact is I wanted the editing simple !

And tell me "try something new" is just dishonest, you just forgot all the editing work I done in other previous videos like "urbanunit clan", or "meant to be". If I want transitions and overlays different, I do them. But not for this video. It is a choice.

I am not sure to understand what do you want to mean for the sync. All hit are sync, same for moves. Could you explain it to me ?

Once again : I understand your points, but most of them are a choice.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash