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[VID] Thrill

hello
i would like your cnc

-this video looked way better before youtube shit on it and made it 30 fps
-kiza's pure force isnt as dark as mine so mine is better and you can see mine thx

replays by myself, internet, and kiza
song is walking on a dream (kids at the bar remix)
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

only thing good in that horrible video was the syncing.
annoying song, bad camera angles, over edit
why are you reversing or whatever it's called.

also what was all that swirling there for
don't talk to me or my dudes ever again
I say it's pretty good, the music is something like generic music for a Toribash video, I kinda liked the editing, although after 0:19 it seems like you ran out of ideas, and rushed that up, other than that, I say it's good. I liked the camera angles.
over editing isn't a specific term meaning you used too many things in it.
it means you went for something nice, but screwed it up with too much of one thing and or didn't do any of it right.

speaking of the velocity, it doesn't compliment the music at all.
all it did was make me focus on the music and by that time I was hating the song.
but i'll be back again once needed.
don't talk to me or my dudes ever again
umm....the pink was distracting, the camera angles were weird, the reversing and forwarding is all akward it's just a mess to be honest. Definitely needs work
Only If I Could Suplex

Originally Posted by Hobo View Post
over editing isn't a specific term meaning you used too many things in it.
it means you went for something nice, but screwed it up with too much of one thing and or didn't do any of it right.

speaking of the velocity, it doesn't compliment the music at all.
all it did was make me focus on the music and by that time I was hating the song.
but i'll be back again once needed.

it's also the same formula i make all my other videos with, which seem to be fine
its just this time there's a theme, using the rewind to go with the music, as you said it did.

ty oopyuman, i had some stuff on the last clip but i thought it was too much so i just left it raw :X
ty suplexes
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by KOTBOLT View Post
Guys, start some longer Videos like in the old toribash days. Logg in a year later and there are still These Macperfekt 30 sec Videos.

thanks for the cnc


you shit
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by Tyzi View Post
it's also the same formula i make all my other videos with, which seem to be fine
its just this time there's a theme, using the rewind to go with the music, as you said it did.

seeming to be fine is just assumption. all of your latest videos are just becoming pink and or bland. there's no real theme and it's just repetitive and annoying. you've consistently chosen bad cc, bad songs, and just lacked compared to some of your first work. you need to get inspiration and take some cnc to heart instead of taking it personal and degradingly. these people that are complimenting general ideas and saying "wow you're amazing" is what is obviously pulling you down. yes, you're good, but not creative.
don't talk to me or my dudes ever again

bad cc


bad cc


bland


bland


repetitive


i dont take cnc to heart if its stupid like what youre telling me right now
your opinion on the music is an opinion, i wouldnt choose it if i didnt like it
Last edited by TyZi; Oct 13, 2013 at 06:59 PM.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Since you can't understand where I'm coming from, I am going to let your ego down.
So, her you go, majesty Tyzi. A full 4-vid-rundown. All to show you that my ignorance is just as well as yours.



Thrill : Horrid, already cnc'd - pink (as stated)
Agitated : Stupid aura glow, horrible transitions with no timing, and another stupid swirl randomly put in there - pink (as stated)
Moondust : Aura glow, again, horrid transitions (same as agitated, no creativity) bad camera, horrid velocity, bad sync in general - i won't go into detail.


TyZi :Bad velocity, transitions. Creativity lacking in that beautiful cc with lovely pink aura throughout these videos. Of course your sync is the only edge you have, yet you have blemishes in that no matter what. You're neither creative, or consistent unless it's in a negative manner. You're really pulling to the 'bad level' of Kolorz where you make things to try and get positive cnc when there's none to give. Thanks, come again.
don't talk to me or my dudes ever again