My first ever -30 manip.

Opener was meh. I'd want the left pec contracted when you kick and a bit before.
You should've kicked with your foot and not your shin imo.
All those head touches made me cry a bit inside.
You make a new launch just the same as the opener into a decent kick that was poorly aimed.

Those launches look boring and uncreative.
Looked like you needed to poop when you posed.

The replay itself is not bad but I keep trying to find something that I honestly like about it and it's hard.

Probably the most generic start in a replay ever, but you more than made up for it with the helicopter mini manip. The only thing that would have been better was if your head didn't get hit on a few moments, but that's ok.
The decap was aimed wierdly, but the transition to the pose and the pose itself were pretty great, nice job.

Thank you.

And now, tricks.

A lot of this C&C is personal preference, but as you're aiming for realism judging on the tricks, I'm going to base a lot of the movement on realism rather than style.

You look way too relaxed and floppy throughout the whole thing, and I can't tell the difference between this replay and the other 50 bajillion versions of this kind of thing.

In the opening, it looks like you extended your right glute way too much as well, which didn't look all too good, and at the end of the replay the right shoulder popping up in the air like that bugs me. I also think the end of the corkscrew twist thing whatever it is would look better without relaxing the left elbow into the pose, but that is really personal preference and the pose isn't that bad (Except for the fact that you fell down at the end, which could be fixed)

Apart from these problems, the movement after the odd opening thing did flow pretty well and the movements from around frame 1100 to 1030 looked really good (Even though I dislike the relaxed/contracted wrists) all I can recommend is make your arm movements look more solid for that part, and I would also recommend attempting to make all your movement of this quality, as it stands out like a sore thumb to me compared to the rest of your movement.

Clean these problems up and then start experimenting with movement (Do new tricks and things which other people haven't done, or just play around with things) and I can guarantee you that your replays will look better than they initially are. (In my eyes at least)

Thank you very much, Notnoob. Seeing walls of text in my threads always makes me happy

Played around in a new parkour mod, fun times.
Link to mod.

Not big on parkour, but it looks pretty damn good to me. The only flaws I see are the flow reversal when jumping off the pipe and the final jump, which looked a bit wierd.
Otherwise, loved the spins and jumps you did over the obstacles right before the end, it flowed very well. Nice replay

Selfspar. :U

Nice, good dodge and flip to jump on the table and spinning kick

Inspiration always flows better between 1-3 AM