maybe the manip would've been better off without a couple of unnecessary hits you did, but the manip was really cool after frame 800. nice uke spinning and glute boom. maybe you could have avoided the grab but it still fitted in ok.
nice

Trying to re-improve

thanks for the CnC by the way guys. I know it's tedious, but I just want to make magnificent booms like the rest of you.

may the wild aura flow through you

Well.

I feel terrible.

Really liked how fast it was, although the dm pattern is old.
I liked the contrast between the speed of the hits and the opener, made the kick stand out more.
Haven't been around this thread lately but I'll be sure to check out pcool replay

thanks man

I'm gunna try to put out some more creative stuff.

angst :/

Wobbly necks aren't really a big deal but in this one your neck looked... too wobbly.
Anyways, the opener was nice, I like how you actually went for a subtle elbow dm before the split, instead of going right into a split (which is usually boring). while dismembering the elbow, your leg twitched because you extended and contracted it fast.
Nice split and the transition to the chest kick looked great (so stylish). You could have got a boom out of that kick to make it look even better.
I usually don't like dming uke like that when he's on the ground but you made it look good because you destroyed the glutes and the torso and posed on them.

I'll never have her