Wie ist es jetzt?

EinVasalle: Also ich fand hauptsфchlich die Anordnung der orangenen Linien stіrend. Wenn du es schaffst, sie an den Kіrper des Toris anzupassen und so zu machen, dass sie nicht so herausstechen, wфre es noch besser. Also jetzt zusфtzlich zu dem was da ist. Wenn du das schaffst, wќrde ich nur noch die Schrift anpassen, sie sollte gleichmфпig groп sein, und am besten wфre es wenn auch sie so feuermфпig ist und mit ein paar orangenen Linien, passend zu dem Tori. Das ist alles was ich jetzt фndern wќrde. Bekommst du das hin?

Fluttershy: Okay, that doesn't look very good. If you would start new and do it like your last whip but with a good fire color for the chakra, it would be perfect. You can decide if you wanna try that.

Ja schaffe ich. Wenn es dich nicht stіrt, wќrde ich das aber lieber morgen machen.

Kein Problem.

Hmm, maybe that chakra more orange, not that dark red. But those light effects on the body are very nice.

Is it possible to make the chakra more... more.. shiny? I mean, that it is more bright, if you know what i try to explain.

That is nearly perfect. Maybe a bit more "shiny" (I dont know a word for that). I will think about it now if there is something that should be changed, but the color is good like it is, so u can recolor the red lines, and can start with the name.

Hmm, i dont know what there could be. Do you have an idea what you could put there?
I don't really like that text btw.

The only idea i would have now would be to put a zoom of that tori head in the upper right corner, where u can clearly see his sharingan. I dont know how that would look. Maybe (If that isn't too much work) you could try that and i'll think about an alternative.

Okay, really nice that you used my skin for it. But i dont really like that fire. Maybe edit it so it matches better with the body or change it completely.
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Maybe put the flames more around the body than on it, like Flutter did.