Toribash
What you did to the crotch was funny. I know the opener is bad and its hard to make anything good out of it but..
The torso boom was really cool and it looked smooth. I usually don't like skeets where you take your own wrist off and you don't dm anything but it looked really stylish and the lumbar started to move fast so i liked it. The second skeet wasn't good and you should have posed before that.
(╯°□°)╯︵ pɐǝɹɥʇ ʎɐldǝɹ
boring arm movement in the opener, stiff elbows and not very "flowy" shoulder movements
other than that the opener goes pretty well with that first boom, which is super cool

the ghosting you get through uke on the 2nd boom looks cool but pretty messy since you get so close to him
however i love the two last kicks, they flow amazingly well and that torso piece looks cool when you grab it, the way it wobbles etc
you get stiff when you pose

nice one tamak- marrez
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