I was trying to make it cartoonish and simple.


Any criticism would be helpful and appreciated.

Thanks for the criticism and I am not mad at you I did not know how to put the image in a spoiler :P

That brown things looks like a cookie. As he said, brown and green isn't compared on that somehow.
Also your work is a little bit too simple bc there's no shading and something complicated on it.
You should try to make some realistic things for your good.
And yss nice try, it's not that bad.

Thank you guys for the criticism and there are two black bars because it is for youtube lol

Try to be consistent, if you have shading on the moon holes than you should have some on the letters too. Little details like that make the things work.

Coloring is too much bland, many colors of the same tone make it dull. Expand the palette and tones, experiment with different things...