I liked the opener. Flowed well and was smooth.
Around 375 your left leg did a bit of twiching going back and forth.
I'd have prefered if you were more ambitious and went for a double knee on the first kick. I actually like the odd use of your body for it though (leaning forward).
Cool knee dms though by letting your leg extend after the dms can lead people into thinking it was more of a kick, and knee dms are more complex so you want people to realize that's what it was.
Swift elbow dm.
Then you kicked around ukes forearm but to no end. I was right at your feet in a easy to manipulate position. In my opinion, you could have done something more with it.
Funky use of your left leg through most of the replay. Constant back and forth looked rather nice and interesting.
Smooth flipping with some great looking positions mid-air that you could have made use of to follow through with a better pose. Finishing in that pose was a bit of a waste.
I'm being nitpicky because you're past regular level replay-making and at that point that you just need to reach further to go for something great. Good job though.
Around 375 your left leg did a bit of twiching going back and forth.
I'd have prefered if you were more ambitious and went for a double knee on the first kick. I actually like the odd use of your body for it though (leaning forward).
Cool knee dms though by letting your leg extend after the dms can lead people into thinking it was more of a kick, and knee dms are more complex so you want people to realize that's what it was.
Swift elbow dm.
Then you kicked around ukes forearm but to no end. I was right at your feet in a easy to manipulate position. In my opinion, you could have done something more with it.
Funky use of your left leg through most of the replay. Constant back and forth looked rather nice and interesting.
Smooth flipping with some great looking positions mid-air that you could have made use of to follow through with a better pose. Finishing in that pose was a bit of a waste.
I'm being nitpicky because you're past regular level replay-making and at that point that you just need to reach further to go for something great. Good job though.
We're still kids in buses longing to be free.
thx oblivion, but i have no ideas for replays and i dont make them that much because all my
openers are generic :(
openers are generic :(
Originally Posted by Dupbuck
Opener was stiff and you got all floaty at the end but holy fuck how is that even fucking possible like are you some sort of fucking god or am I just fucking high I don't know
YOU R A MAGIC REPLAY GOD THOSE BOOMS*trigger happy*
dude none of that was really that amazing, no offense. like stop kissing up really come on. you're not even funny dude.
anyway opener wasn't bad boom was average movement was ok I like the end.
ok/10 you ghosted.
wow that
sucked
sucked
