Toribash
Fine. New replay.

Thanks to Pusga for helping by discussing the setup and move at the third dm's.

Thanks to Internet for recommending Pusga o7
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That was one of the absolute coolest fuckin' replays I have ever seen. Fucking great dude. There are a few minor movement issues but they just add to the uniqueness of the replay, really. Keep up the awesome work, Mud. You're really progressing.

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ok so listen here you little shit

opener was cool as fuck.

manip was awesome, just the way YOUR FUCKING HEAD HIT UKE. looked bad, dont do that.

im writing this as you are showering.

几arva-Speeed.rpl

OK SO FUCKIN

the opener was cool and all, just fix those abs.

knee dms were sweet, awesome.

glute and crotch dm(s) were pretty hot, like how you didnt have to grab for them like the knee dms.

little sad you didnt get a decap tho. would have been awesome if you got a decap by kicking ukes crotch down.

GOOD>

三HEYSAIDSTUFFYOIPURMIS.rpl

my keyboard is sliding off my legs because im wearing pajamas

OPENER WAS REALLY BORING AND SLOW. GLAD YOU FIXED THAT IN YOUR MORE RECENT REPLAYS.

DECAP AND SPLIT WERE COOL AND ALL, WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF IT WAS A MADMAN THOUGH, CANT COMPLAIN, GOOD AS IT IS

luv the transition to the pose.

grats

了ffffNoVulgarityOk.rpl

imbleeding

holy shit your flow. what happen

cool opener, pretty generic tho.

split looked weak.

arm dms n shit was cool i guess

nice boom.

:*

oh yea btw nice pose

上ell NameMyReplayAfterMyAnusaaa.rpl

well uh, les go

i saw this in slys vid. i hated it. let me yell at you.

OPENER GENERIC

the way you pushed uke with your hand also sucked

when you lifted with that kick it looked weird.

dont contract your elbows n shit a lot like the way you did in the replay. it looked terrible.

the way you had to get to uke looked like a strech.

glute dms were ok looking, the thing you did with your elbows and knees wasnt as good.

transition to the boom was ok i guessss. pose was best part of replay. gj.

because you arnt done showering 1 more i guess.

nvm next one i cant. too bad.


[4:30:01 PM] Hattersin: there's no such thing as being too harsh
[4:30:03 PM] Hattersin: :y