anyway not much to say on no.13 really, fast hits and stuff and joints flying. it's pretty ok. now you don't really have to listen to this part, but imo grabbing before actually grabbing something doesn't look good imo.

no.14 -

that punch on the first replay was pretty bangin man. that crotch boomhit was super impressive too, you got some penetration going there.
the grab was strangely placed though. you made Uke slap your back

the second replay shows nearly's amazing movement and dat freaking boom doe.

Replay

Two new replays yay.

:I

No.18: I don't mind a replay lacking flow as long as it compensates with something else, and it sorta did, but it seemed a bit lacking :I the dms weren't very satisfactory and it was kinda slow.

No.19: now this was awesome. that split looked like something that should give you a lot of trouble but you did it really well and still got a perfect transition to a pose. awesome replay.

Replays.

Eh.

Manips are stupid and I don't like them.

I put effort into this, EFFORT.