SO MANNERS WAS ALL LIKE LETS PLAY TORIBASH OR SOMETHING AND I WAS LIKE FUCK THAT AND HE WAS LIKE COLAB ITSGOINGTOBEBAD AND I WAS LIKE LOL LETS NOT EVEN DO IT FOR REAL AND HE WAS LIKE SURE LOL AND THIS HAPPENED

Whats that? no cnc? cool

Can I have some form of "Aiona Ealtrik, you suck at replays, get good"


oh yeah cnc thats it

Nothing much i can say, although in manners, after the first hit, it just seemed a little bit stiff to me.

Keep on going mang, you are getting better and better by the day

that self spar one was weeeeeeeird, so I'm gunna cnc your collab

all in all, the manipulation was good so yay you... guys
um, a lot of the kicks seemed unecessary like you were goin' all NYEEEHHHH and trying to shoo him off so I'm all "we-well, okay..."

the split was... good. It was weird. But not bad. I prefer extensions with my hits. Makes 'em look more powerful like "WHAPAH, BYITCH".

so, um, yeah more focused hits aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand execution?

yeah, it was good. 8/10

Seems I get alot more cnc when i make replays that are strange so...

Bump, need some cnc on that manip thing


also watching it at x5 speed is neat

lots of stiff movements in the opener, with some awkward stopping and starting with your spins. It was almost good, but definitely could've standed more polish. You let your head get hit at the beginning of the manip, not good. The entire manip portion was actually quite good I though, you did a great job with that, except for that last hit at around 450 that didn't do much. I would've liked for the hits to have a bit more flow between them, I felt like it took too long for you to do something else after the split.
Overall, it seemed like you just didn't spend enough time making sure everything looks good. You seem to have pretty good control of your tori, you just don't have the patience to make everything refined, and lack the experience to choose the best option in certain situations. It's really not that bad, but its just that it could be so much better.

Thank you for the cnc. It means a lot, I will for sure try to work on everything you mentioned.

Im working on something better but I guess I can post this as a bump of sorts

hold your neck

movement was generic
cough

kick was ok