Originally Posted by Cat

hold the neck

you were hitting yourself in the beginning dont do that if it gives ukes points for no reason

opener was generic as FUCK

manip was terrible, all you did was kick uke and make him go fast

you fucking stop ukes rotation you fags, it looks odd and you just made it end abruptly

dms were okay would have been better if they were symmetrical

skeets are almost never needed and it wasnt needed even more in this replay

all the movement was ridged and twitchy besides a few parts

when doing manips dont get uke so close to the ground, it gets dumb if you do

pose was ok

Originally Posted by Pair

Bask in the glory that is this video which is this wip.

Originally Posted by xioi

Tried my shit at something new :P