Well, I am here today to host a mini event!

What this event is for:
Make a good story for my clan [Rome] The Roman Empire

It must be related to the Roman times, back in medieval ages. It cannot be short, has to be at least a Paragraph and a half.

I will judge by the following:
Grammar
Depth
Detail
Mood

Deadline: April 1st(Mostly a week)

Prize: and 1K TC

Fiction which is related to Toribash, and the clan Rome
But try to make it sound real :P

Please refrain from posting useless posts in here. This does not deal with anything I asked for, so it's useless. Next post will be reported.

Rome, the powerful city, was governed by kings, but after only seven of them had ruled, the Romans took power over their own city and ruled themselves.
They then instead had a council known as the 'senate' which ruled over them. From this point on one speaks of the 'Roman Republic'.
The Roman Republic was a very successful government.
The greatest challenge the Roman Republic faced was that of the Carthaginians. Carthage was a very powerful city in North Africa which, much like Rome, controlled its own empire. The fight between the two sides was a long one and took place on land and on sea.
The most famous incident came when the great Carthaginian general, crossed the mountain chain of the Alps to the north of Italy with all his troops, including his war-elephants ! and invaded Italy !
Sadly 1 Troop left and he was named DeakManiac, the most famous citizen in Rome. They started to laugh on him because they didn't knew what power can he create he said that he want to challenge the best fighter in all Carthaga and there leader accepted and made him challenge the most powerful man in there city but with two punches that strong man was dead. the leader was angry so he wanted to challenge Deak by himself but the duel wasn't fighting by hands... It was by swords ! Deak said that if he won Carthaginians need to retreat and the challenge started. After a long day of tiredness Deak have took off the head of carthaginians' king they had to retreat but Deak wasn't an oppressor so he made them his troops and so he reconstructed Rome and made it unbeatable.

The End.
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Hope You Enjoy The Story.
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and btw i want to wish u a gd luck for the clan

I would like to note:
I will give you credit for making the story, it will say (By: "WinnersName")

A long time ago, a soldier was born in the depth of the underworld. His name was DeakManiac. He was born out of the flesh of the great God Zeus. His mother was the goddess of strategy and war, Athena. Everywhere he went, he found darkness and hopelessness wherever. He new the evils and sins of mankind had to be vanquished orelse someday,
It will grow to strong to fight. This is why he formed the clan Rome. To kill all the evil and sin of this world. People who stand with the clan shall gain rickes beyond their measure, peiple who stand against this clan, shall perish.

Hey deak you judge by the dimension of the story or by the meaning ?

When I read the story, I want to be able to picture it, understand it.

so who won deak i wanna really know

Giving people 3 more hours Ravey.
It's still 10:13 PM where I am, not the 1st yet. :P