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Good to see you stuck 'round here skip.
Editing atm, also did you like the head spin?
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Scratch that, making an entirely new replay
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New tricking replay, somehow couldn't get much momentum in this one, luckily I landed a few flips and stuff I also loved the opener
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imaSlayaa-Tricking 2.rpl (262.2 KB, 16 views)
Last edited by imaSlayaa; Apr 5, 2014 at 01:06 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Hm

You ghost too much, try not to make your arms go through your legs (Or your legs go through themselves)

Your arms are too stiff

Could work on your setups for the flips and stuff

If you see something you don't like, just go back and edit it.
I do some videos
Feel free to PM me for any video-related questions
Was messing around in mp, so I made a mp replay thread
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?p=7229034
Also added it to the OP
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New replay, self spar this time.
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imaSlayaa-Self spar 1.rpl (244.0 KB, 27 views)
Last edited by imaSlayaa; Apr 8, 2014 at 11:55 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
The run toward uke was stiff

Contacts were nice

Try to keep your legs slightly bent more often like you had uke at the beginning of the replay

Keep your neck extended so it doesn't flop around or look broken

During contacts you might want to relax the joint making the contact

Overall a good start into selfsparring, hope you can get help from this.