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[ART]JayXManHD's Pictures and Examples
Hey Everyone

I have 3 photos for ya to show to you! I really hope you like them:




Example

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ToribashAwesomeness.jpg (12.3 KB, 149 views)
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Last edited by Forex; May 4, 2014 at 06:17 PM. Reason: Adding TEXT
Originally Posted by Night View Post
you forget to use [Art] on your title....

Thanks for telling me! I'm more of a noob to forums so yeah.
To be honest, the images, though they have good ideas, have really bad effects. You chose colors that really don't work together, on the first one you just took the tori and slapped him on that picture with the electrical stuff and put that text and Bam! That's just not the way you do it. That example pic is one that I kinda liked, even though it's really simple, it looks good, as opposed to the first two ones. Either way, you can improve, don't worry.
Originally Posted by Metriakon View Post
Those aren't photos. Let's discuss the electric one. I like the idea. A tori, on a background of constant electrical discharges. The idea is brilliant, it seems rather abstract but I like abstract things; things that don't fit in. Yes. The idea is pretty cool, no doubt in that. Even though the idea was good and creative, it has been poorly executed. Your skills in making any sort of digital images are close to none, the images have horrible effects on them, the bits of text are just looking boring. To add to that, you've saved them in JPEG, which decreases the quality of the images by a whole lot.

Thank you for being honest at least and I just looked up 'Electric Sparks' on google for those effects
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Oopyuman Thank you for being honest about it
Last edited by Forex; May 4, 2014 at 09:32 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by Organs View Post
try to get better poses for the toris, these look off balanced and unnatural

I'm just starting out on sparring so that will happen soon
I don't think that anyone has told you to do /lp 0 [name] yet. Pick a player. Let's use me, for example. do /dl Irrita
Then do /lp 0 Irrita
Now you have textures that may fit the pictures better.
*don't actually use me, I don't have textures.
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Originally Posted by Irrita View Post
I don't think that anyone has told you to do /lp 0 [name] yet. Pick a player. Let's use me, for example. do /dl Irrita
Then do /lp 0 Irrita
Now you have textures that may fit the pictures better.
*don't actually use me, I don't have textures.

Please I don't understand fluid sarcasm so don't start. I would not like to be rude
Originally Posted by Metriakon View Post
That isn't sarcasm, just by the way.

Its fluid not that far past sarcasm

Hey Guys how about this one!

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Last edited by Forex; May 7, 2014 at 11:35 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by Organs View Post
pose is better
but what the fuck are you saying?

"its fluid not that far past sarcasm"
what does that even mean?

It sounded like Sarcasm but fluid and not that far past. All I got :/
Originally Posted by JayXManHD View Post
It sounded like Sarcasm but fluid and not that far past. All I got :/

Originally Posted by Organs View Post
WHAT DOES THAT MEAN

Already told you
Originally Posted by JayXManHD View Post
All I got