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Gentleman's Elegant Tricking and Freerunning
Hey guys! I'm going to take a break from my usual routine of making madman replays and transition to tricking and freerunning. I only ask that you make constructive posts and tell me what I can improve on

Let's start off with a two simple tricks. I will be adding some parkour replays tomorrow
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Originally Posted by Scyther1 View Post
backflips are very basic,not much to say about them

cork was in its way unique,but i don't like it because you left your leg extended

also try to land on feet

Thanks! Alright I'll try to remember that.

Here is my attempt at following up a butterfly kick with a corkscrew.
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Originally Posted by SparChar View Post
I can't trick. WHY?!

:<

Anyway...I've been neglecting my responsibility of managing this thread and making replays so I've been making two parkour replays simultaneously. But, in the mean time, shout mean things at me about this simple aerial kick.
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The corkscrew wasn't a corkscrew.
You had the spin but you never went inverted.
Try not to rotate your chest when you cork.
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Originally Posted by Askijeki View Post
The flip with the kick was really nice, but the landing was stiff and the 'throw-mah-arm-out' was bad. Not terrible

Thanks. Yeah, I've always had trouble with landings; I'll try to fix 'em up.

Originally Posted by Chilledon View Post
The corkscrew wasn't a corkscrew.
You had the spin but you never went inverted.
Try not to rotate your chest when you cork.

Alright, thanks for the advice.




Here's a double back-kick that I am known for doing I did.
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bump.

whoa, haven't posted here in awhile; so here is another replay :o. CnC is greatly appreciated.
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Originally Posted by craftinbros View Post
Welcome back, the only problem I had with this replay was the way you posed, you kinda landed then re-posed which looked kind weird


Yeah, well, I've never been good at transitioning into a pose xD

I'll try to improve on that though
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Urbane Retribution- Ok, about the opener, I would've like for you to ask about using it.
as for the trick, it was nice.
I don't really like how you contrated your elbow out of nowhere
pose couldve been alot better, try to stand straight up and not use your hands to balance yourself.

anyway, nice replay, try to be a bit more smooth
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