Nice Take down (Jisse tori) its a move That people who
know these martial arts just recognize. Good job jisse. to bad your head touched
uke and glowed red. but no bigdeal somtimes it just should .
nice heel kick too (Uke)
Your learning it.
But Try to take more steps and stances the way you would do it irl. i leard that many extending and contracting should be done to make a toribash take the stance YOU WANT it to take, so make time for it . YOU want it to do a move, so dont let it move the way its likely going to do.
example :
when you wanted to step back. you kept the legs really extended. dont keep
it extended to avoid looking like a drafting compass to draw circles.
what I do to step to a direction:
1. I place the weight to the direction i want to go, so that the ghost shows
like its gonna fall that direction
2. the stepping leg should bend its knee a little. ( shorter than the leg that still holds)
3. extend the knee gently of the stepping to catch the weight .
4. i do 2 and 3 again for the other leg to do a second step.
5. I twist the chest or pecs in some direction for some contra movement to stay balanced
( if you look at my taekwondo replay, you will see how it takes steps after
it got a hit in the face in frame 2800)