I really don't like the grab, it forced you to stop moving for a while
Kick was aimed weirdly, a 2dm hit to hit off both arms looks better than a 2dm hit to hit off an arm and a pec
Why did you set up for a kick with your left leg then pull back
Chest kick was okay I guess, but eh too much grab
Ghosted getting into the spin, which was stiff
Leg kick looked powerful, could have gone for a groin boom
Pose was a pose