Toribash
Originally Posted by Gargon555 View Post
Nice replay indeed.

The opener was, well, generic, but you followed it up pretty well.
The first DM. It was a twitch, you know that.
Grab was nice, first boom was slick.
Couldnt recognise if the second hit was a boom (its 10pm over here, gimme a break.) but it was neat.
I dont like the pose that much. I like replays in which you can see the pose, but in this, yea.

Overall 9.5/10


Thanks gargon
Second hit wasnt a boom tho.

New replay
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Originally Posted by Kaszanas View Post
Mhmm, why to make a spin when you're not going after it ?
I dont like that part when you go into a spin and you're not making it happen, it is like having sex without the ending xD
The hit with your shin is really nice, could be performed better just to make the hit with the lower part of the shin, not really just under the knee.
Frame 312, I don't like the execution of this kick as you extend your leg, i would rather make it a hook kick where you destroy whole chest etc. yeah but you had some purpose in it to collide the parts after, so it is looking nice, you even managed to make the back rollover really good, and finish with a pose, so the replay is stylish, fast, nice, and overall looking good, just some minor things that I PERSONALLY would make the other way just so that would look a little better for me, and that is my opinion on that
CnC'd in ya face.

Thank you

New thing, am i cool yet?
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Originally Posted by Scyther1 View Post
opener is ok,first jump was good until you extended your knee and kept it like
that for a couple of frames. Second jump flows nicely and looks cool.
boom is nice,and transition to the pose is in my opinion awesome. pose looks
okay but could have been better if you extended your hips a bit more

8/10

thank you

Originally Posted by AkumaZZZ View Post
Opener was ok, but I didn't like that ground stomp you did at 590. You also ghosted your arm through your leg at 550 (it's not exactly a sinful thing to do, but it looks very sloppy).
The spin before the kick was nicely executed, though I expected much more from the kick itself.
The pose was ok.

Honestly, the replay was very good, but It sort of feels incomplete for the fact that you simply left uke's body there, waiting to be destroyed.


yeah i was just messing around when i made that, probably should have fixed the ghosting though, thank you



new replay for the opener competition
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Last edited by Osiris; Jun 8, 2014 at 03:44 PM.
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aside from the ridiiiiiiiiiiculously slow start, that replay was killer

opener was weird, but pretty new
first two hits were executed pretty okay
the whole mini-manipulation of the leftover body was super cool and I love the final boom that came with it

too many replay threads I have to stalk, aaaaaaa
beware
the goblin
Originally Posted by Marrez View Post
aside from the ridiiiiiiiiiiculously slow start, that replay was killer

opener was weird, but pretty new
first two hits were executed pretty okay
the whole mini-manipulation of the leftover body was super cool and I love the final boom that came with it

too many replay threads I have to stalk, aaaaaaa

thank you marrez

don't usually do spars but yeah.
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Originally Posted by Miyako View Post
You have great flow i don't know if the fracture was meant to be on but it was pretty cool, hold your neck though i make that mistake sometimes too it and it has ruined some of my replays also i would recommend not contracting your wrists for no reason other than that great replay.

Thanks Miyako, the fractures were intended


Edited an old replay, happier with this version.
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Your style has changed and I like it, I love how uke was there for a few seconds then suddenly disappeared i'll actually try to give legit cnc on all the replays here l8r when I feel like it.