Originally Posted by Hlmaster

So, you want to rhyme?

Fine, but don't complain when the hip and the hop
blow away your mind.
My rhyme mindfucks your thoughts of time, it's almost like a crime.
you can notice how life says you goodbye.
This thread might soon be closed, nice try, but the mods won't let stupidity pass by.
But don't be mad if it happens, it does sometimes,
Just don't whine while you explain things why.

Cya, kthxbye.
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And you're who to say such things into waste?
Asians always gonna have someone to overcome your skill and hate.
what lacks in you is your humility and some common sense.
but fuck it, because my rhymes strike you so hard and so dense,
you can't even feel your heartbeat, hence,
I'm going easy on your for this first time,
you say you're godly pro but you lack true life rhymes.
Don't blame on the weed or you might get fuck'd up
since when talented people keep saying they're the best? shut up.
you're nobody, I'm nobody and we are one,
but I'm me, and against me, you're done.

Originally Posted by Kradel

Should be in Music session. I guess all the other rap threads have died so I will start this off:

I'm a natural sound artist.
'Cause of all the skill I harvest.
This moment is your darkest.
Definitely not your smartest.
So why don't you turn back.
You're heading down the wrong track.
I honestly think you should kick back.
This genre isn't one you can hack.

'Cause with your type of skill, there is no chance you can succeed.
You're lucky your not a kid in Asia forced to make your girlfriends beads.
You don't understand lyrics, you just rap about getting money and weed.
Blank yourself please, before future rappers start to follow your lead.
Now it's time you know I will take you down because I am your predator.
I have much more talent than you, I create music and I'm an editor.
Stop repeating the same bars to each and every competitor.
You're not original, you need to learn, you really need an educator.

Originally Posted by T0ribush

I hope you kids had your fun because you'll be dropping
As fast as stones when I'm done and through with you fools
Using mastercraft grammatical tools plus 5 with skills
None of you competitors ever seen before
I'm at the very tip top of the hip hop mountain peak
I've raised the bar with bars so hard I'm off the charts and
Today will be the day I put an end to these brain rotting ways
So quit with the random spray as I lay you all to rest
With precision aim followed by the force of a freight train

Originally Posted by Kradel

You call him a disgrace? You can't even write a grammatically correct sentence.
Other than your bad bars, what disgusts the most is your presence.
You realize just you being here attracts bad thoughts.
Worse than the thoughts Nazi's attracted during the Holocaust.
You attract innocence that thinks to like you.
Hold up, I said that backwards.
You like to think that innocence attracts you.
It doesn't in fact, it hates you like it hates complaints coming from fat dudes.
Fix your problems, were not talking math but change too,to,two.
Just like them, your too lazy to do anything about your problems.
Complain constantly and hope Jesus comes down and solves them.
You say you won't fuck people like other guys do?
But you will get fucked by other guys the way gay guys do.
Wordplay isn't my strong point but it's great to use.
'Cause idiots like you don't understand a word I produce.
Slow down, hold it back. Take your religious bar again.
Then you can can start to feel, every Christians revenge.
Now, sit down, please. I would like to present.
Me, the best rapper here, a gifted decent.

Yeah, wordplay is very fun when used correctly :3 I highly suggest it. Here is a good example of an amazing wordplay:

Since you act like the big guy in a dinosaur film.
You can share the same fate of those who 'die-in-a-saw' film.

Originally Posted by KillerBotX

Having the day of your life? Well im ganna end it.
And when you wake up your going to feel the hiccup
of me killing you inside with with my raps.
So suck it messed up peak, with the games that you sneak
That's right you have a big height fright so when you see me
you will wee. Had enough? Are you Tough? not really because
you shove!

Originally Posted by protonitron

Anyone can come up with one or two rhymes with adverbs,
But you can't seem to have fun without repeating your words.
May I make a plea that you stop subjecting me to read nouns used adjectively,
Admittedly you can probably see that the rhyme on the previousness line was ironically was an aforementioned use of an adverb but at least I don't descend into bars which lend themselves to idiocy.
And HLnaster nobody would call your rymes crime, contrary to how you see yourself your far from divine, all you are doing is wasting your time, which is fine. Now I'm going to hope you can cope with these ropes of mine. Your use of words is so poor you should just head for you door before you abuse this opportunity any more.

This is my first attempt at any rapping and most of my contempt in this post was just acting so I hope we can be content to view each other as brothers in this event since we are all equally bad (there was no rymes in these last couple of words and for that I am truly not regretful since this thread is retarded).

Originally Posted by T0ribush

There is no way you can compete trying to use my words against me.
I'm awake and already baked chewing out wannabe fakes with a rap
So stacked I'm ready for a verbal war with my lyrical ensemble score
Like music I'm striking notes and chords in harmony with a flow
Too steady delivering blows too deadly to those who think they know
A shove from me is enough to show your half assed words who's uncle

Originally Posted by protonitron

The thing with ryming "ing"s is that you can sing any verb in eng-lish language. I don't want to be held hostage to you stupidity which you're spilling on me.

I'm not gunna bother to write any more on ya (meaning your) thread for a while since it actually getting quite late and I need to go to bed.

And yes; the last bit was ironic.

Originally Posted by protonitron

Anyone can come up with one or two rhymes with adverbs,
But you can't seem to have fun without repeating your words.
May I make a plea that you stop subjecting me to read nouns used adjectively,
Admittedly you can probably see that the rhyme on the previousness line was ironically was an aforementioned use of an adverb but at least I don't descend into bars which lend themselves to idiocy.
And HLnaster nobody would call your rymes crime, contrary to how you see yourself your far from divine, all you are doing is wasting your time, which is fine. Now I'm going to hope you can cope with these ropes of mine. Your use of words is so poor you should just head for you door before you abuse this opportunity any more.

This is my first attempt at any rapping and most of my contempt in this post was just acting so I hope we can be content to view each other as brothers in this event since we are all equally bad (there was no rymes in these last couple of words and for that I am truly not regretful since this thread is retarded).

Originally Posted by protonitron

I have an idea! We could start alternating lines to make a group rap!

Please edit the thread description so this is a thing. We will have to do some sort of linking rhyme with the line posted by the last person. After a while it can be posted together as only terrible and disgusting rap.

And sorry for offending you

Originally Posted by Hlmaster

What the fuck, who the fuck?
Says my name wrong at the start... you might be out of luck.
Prepare to get hammered by a truck, because that's what I'm doing rolling over your college rhymes that suck.
Kid, don't come gramatically over a fight that messes up your reality or else it's a fatality to have your presence in this, truly tragically, encounter of two minds developing duality. BRU-TA-LI-TY!
Stick your sentences over your own self, don't blame sins over someone else, nobody is godly and never ever will be, but fuck it, I'm bold staring at your face, wannabe. You see? I don't mean to offend, but if it's a rhyme battle, I must attend, especially since even your face doesn't blend, this is a rap battle thread, not a school where idiots learn how things can be read.
That said, I'd like to say you're kind of good for your first time, but please, don't try to pick the hamster into a rhyme fight.
bye ♥