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Thank you

hair looks flaaat
try and imitate how other anime artists that you like color their hair

shapes of the hair really weirded me out, with how it goes from square to sharp and back to square


eyebrows arent even the same weight :b

I see that I'm not the only pervo around, hehe

but yeah, generally, your sketches are better than your digital re-works. That's understandable and I'm sure you'll get even better at the digital stuff.

now I'm gunna nitpick



the parting in her hair looks weird, feels oddly placed
and her eye is a little awk too, like it's sliding out.
her legs are little weird too

otherwise, fantastic job Mike. With your permission of course, could I line art and color this?

Your lines aren't sharp and that ruins everything. Do not use fluffy shadows or anything not sharp in combination with this kind of art.

Again, your sketches are awesome. I do not know if you're just ripping them off the internet or doing it free hand. But either way, your inking is horrible. On the cyborg you used just a single thickness on the lines. Any dynamic feel is stripped away. You used some really ugly shadows around the face area. If I had the energy to bend over and get my penpad I could ink one of your nice sketches for you to show you how much better your things could be with proper inking.

Ok ink please, I'll be grateful to you