Toribash
Originally Posted by matarika View Post
And imslaya..this was not meant to be an edit video, and everybody keeps commenting or poor effects or poor key framing or poor editing, once again this was never meant to be an edit, therefore i didn't focus on that. For example when you show someone something in a book, you don't put stickers and sparkles around it before you show it to them. This video was more about presenting a concept or idea more than the editing.

yeh, you don't turn up your brightness either

srs doe, try read this:


and you don't use ink(toris) the same color as the backround when making the book


ANYWAY, I seen nothing wrong with the keyframing(I'm not an editor though).
and it wouldn't have been hard to edit out the couple frames where your brightness goes up, it ruins the feel of the video.

Originally Posted by matarika View Post
This video was more about presenting a concept or idea more than the editing.

I'll give you that it's a great concept, it just wasn't executed as well as it could have been.
Last edited by imaSlayaa; Jul 16, 2014 at 12:19 PM.
Originally Posted by matarika View Post
So its more of advertising than an Edit, so don't Cnc on the crappy effects, because i put no effort into the effects and keyframing


Why do you even consider that art then ?

anyway the brightness changes made me laugh a bit too hard.

nice video overall but a lot of noobsins 5/12

EDIT: matafu look like medium skill sparring to me.
Last edited by Kamy; Jul 16, 2014 at 04:45 PM.
yeh you dont have to, just like you dont have to comment, anyway like I said above it's a nice concept, just the video could have been better if he did a couple(ONLY 2) different things.
a shader
and re-doing the part with the brightness thing.