having trouble finishing this

I wanted to post this a while ago but I forgot but now I remembered so here is it is
The mixing and stuff I am still working on so I'm aware of that problem
Everything after the piano melody ends is me messing around trying to come up with what's next.

Suggestions and CNC appreciated

Oh yeah I made this with FL Studio 11 Producer Edition

i like the metallic feel the bass synth has, and the harsh hihat/whatever percussion element that was panned slightly to the left helped that. the only problem i had with the intro was that it seemed a bit repetitive after a whole bar

it gets really good with the piano melody though. the part after the intro does a nice job showing the style of the track but i am not sure i like the notes played with the pad. before that it had a nice harsh feel but i think the harmony the pad used works a lot better with the piano melody, not so much on its own

i like the piano melody, i think because the first half of it (A C E A x2 A C E F x2) gives it a feeling of sadness. that feeling of sadness however you turned into a feeling of mystery(-ish(?)) on the second half of the melody, and i liked it a lot. however, i would have enjoyed if the last part of it had a bit more drama to it. instead of it being A C E B x2, A C E G# x2, i would like to know what |A C E B x2, A C E G#, A C E A| sounds like, or A C E B x2, A C E C2, A C E G#

i like it so far