I think maybe you should stick to cleaning poo,
instead of attempting a rhyme with room temperature IQ.
These raps I read so far barely compare to how my mind is,
I'd say another rap reply won't effect me in the slightest.
I keep it where my heart can interconnect with my mind,
not like you fucking fakers rapping wasting all my time.
My metaphors are dirty like herpes but harder to catch,
Harder than Bercat's nipples when he won his first match.
I don't think I could explain to you exactly how I feel,
but I do know I could explain what I've done to become this real:
I climbed over barbed wire, walked through broad fire,
spit sick as bronchitis, ignored god's guidance.
They say "one has never quit",
so I won't stop spittin ti'll I make you feel like shit.
You ever look inside your soul?,
Cause people see what we can see besides your stylic flows,
my honesty's definin' me it kinda helps me grow,
But honestly I'm feeling like this faggot doesn't know...
Unless you comment on my flow,
cause now I'm taking tips I do not strip but I'm exposed.
I envision evil ways connecting with own,
you should be a pawn, while the king collects his gold.
Plus your raps are fucking flawed,
yeah I can compare to Jesus Christ the son of god,
cause I sacrifice myself and when I write you see my scars,
and my crowns made of thorns, you'll be down when I'm gone.
My sound is so strong, the corners of my mind,
are similar to shorties on the corner on the grind.
Focused on my own shit so it's more than spitting rhymes,
I think hours ahead like I flow in Pacific time.
So the west side reads it first, and they feel the hurt,
Of being fucked on a forum where people rarely look..
Last edited by Juandissimo; Aug 25, 2014 at 07:01 PM.
Reason: Grammar :L