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Gentleman's Snazzy Singleplayer Shenanigans
I'm most likely going to use this thread for madmans, decaps, and stuff of that sort. Gonna start with a decap. CnC is appreciated. Cheers.




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I edited 'Cheeky Bastard' and made it more of a aerial, downwards kick.
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Last edited by visceral; Aug 8, 2014 at 12:46 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by Wik View Post
I like the edit more, cleaner and more in control after the decap

Yeah, I just noticed the oddity of the transition into the pose in the first replay.

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Anyway, I've been working on a madman for about a week or so and I have to say, I really like it. What does everyone else think?
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#Gentleman [M] - Quid Pro Quo.rpl (304.9 KB, 22 views)
QUID PRO QUO - The opener was cool, loved the spins. First kick could've been better, cleaner, etc.. Second kick was alright, didn't have much power behind it.

The transition to the "boomhit" could be WAY smoother, you just kind of fell into position. The kick itself was alright, flowed pretty good, but I feel like you just got a 2DM kick and then your right leg split him, but I don't know.

Skeet and pose were nice. 8/10.
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Originally Posted by Rumour View Post
dangggg thats sick dude :o

Oh, stop it you <3

Originally Posted by Gradeger View Post
QUID PRO QUO - The opener was cool, loved the spins. First kick could've been better, cleaner, etc.. Second kick was alright, didn't have much power behind it.

The transition to the "boomhit" could be WAY smoother, you just kind of fell into position. The kick itself was alright, flowed pretty good, but I feel like you just got a 2DM kick and then your right leg split him, but I don't know.

Skeet and pose were nice. 8/10.

Thanks for the feedback, and yeah, I guess it was a 2 dm kick.

Made a new replay or something. Thanks to MrJingles1 for helping get the first boom
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I really, REALLY thought that that replay would get some love. Anyway, been away from singleplayer for quite a long time. Trying to do a manip, kinda doing it. Not very satisfied so far but...Here's a WIP
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Last edited by visceral; Sep 4, 2014 at 02:49 AM.
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I've lost all hope on that terrible manip attempt.
Here's a replay that I'm pretty happy with.
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#Gentleman [m] Double Dipping.rpl (182.2 KB, 25 views)
Last edited by visceral; Sep 13, 2014 at 03:42 AM.
cnc for D.D.
First off I like the opener, it puts you up for a perfect kick but the way that you contracted the knee before you hit is the first big no no. I like the twirl after that and the kick but I did not like the way that you dm'd the arm on contact, it would have been all right if you had dm'd at the shoulder but the elbow not so much. The first kick that get bolth the legs is fine, but I hate that that same CONTAC(TING) Leg gets the dm on the arm, it is useless and un realistic! the boom hit after that was alright but the I think it would have looked better if you hadn't had done the flip to get into a pose and instead stayed at the last dm spot and posed


All in all its a good replay Minus the contracting of the knee. Keep it up
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Can I maybe use your starter?
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Something.rpl (90.8 KB, 9 views)
Last edited by Zorow; Sep 13, 2014 at 04:54 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

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i dont like this
you combined both of the most generic openers into one, and it looks really not good
the whole leg thing also ruined the flow, the way you stopped after to launch didnt help it at all
the whole spin from launch this has been done 1000 times, didnt really exicute it well either

dms were dms, but i dont like how they happened. you basically sacrificed the enter end replay for dsm and that isnt good

also hacked dms or lowered thresh ?
EDIT: they are hacked dms, atleast say that they r or something
tldr no flow pretty generic and (ithink)pretty hacked
Last edited by cat; Sep 16, 2014 at 04:08 PM.
I did a collab w/ PubicSoup a day or two ago. The opener is mine; he did the split and launch. Everything else was either my editing or his, thus two versions of the replay.

#GentlePubes
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