Replay WIP. First manipulation. I like where it is going, but don't know what I should do. Suggestions and edits are appreciated!

I will add more frames in notepad to complete the manip.

Thanks for the tip. I think I'll just scrap that replay. I liked how it looked at first, but the more I see it, the more flaws I find.

how about this one check this one

Ty jclark, that's pretty epic. It made me think of another way for a manip, and I think I'll actually finish this replay now XD

I have like, 4 replays on the go and then I just get overwhelmed and finish none of them (which is why this thread is dead atm)

Mmk!

I'm not dead anymore I guess. New tricking replay, not terrible, not great. Walking backwards at the beginning was Largekilla inspired (didn't do a fantastic job...). The rest I liked until I corked, which was kind of meh.

CnC please ;)
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Edit: I'm fixing the cork so it's less "meh". I'll probably add more to the replay as well

Ok, finished the replay. Basically, fixed the first cork, added a second cork. Lookin pretty fancy

Thanks, I'll work on keeping my movement smoother.

Pretty good. Nice and solid, but you didn't maintain balanced speed.
The first cork was slow and nice, I like it.
But then in the second cork, it looked more violent and quick, which I don't particularly like.
Overall pretty fluid, but you might want to work on transitions.
And it was pretty stiff at points.

Thanks for the comments guys

Made another one, nice and smooth. The corks are more open, and I have better form. Shout out to Flash for giving me some tips about co-ordination and stuff. I think I should try to be a little more creative, but I'm still working on smoothing out my kinks XD.

CnC c:

Nice replay
I like how you started with the slight jump and the use of your arm to flip you over.
The rest of the flips were okay, the reason I thought they were only okay is because every time you get your foot extended or close to it, you just contract it instatnly.
You could of done different things with your legs whilst in the air, but I guess if you just wanted spins, it's fine.