Reading this thread
you will surely have been led
to think we're stupid.
I tried to make syllable count 4, 7, 4 but it ended up as 4, 7, 5 and the end of the lines don't actually rhyme unless said aloud and even then it is a long shot.
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I don't know why
it is so hard to deny
we are all high.
The last word only rhymes phonetically, but syllable count works.
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I spend about 45 minutes writing a three paragraph essay on the poetic techniques used by kookoo in his poem about Skylar but because I didn't do it all at once I couldn't post it and now it is lost forever. I honestly threw my phone at the ground. It wasn't the first time I had tried posting it but the first time it was only two paragraphs. I hate my life.
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Oh so much strife
I'll kill someone with a knife,
I hate my life.
The middle line doesn't work, I couldn't think of anything relevant which rhymed with strife.
Hey chill out, maybe Skylar is just a huge f***ing idiot online. And in real life he could be even more of a f***ing idiot. Some people are just as worthless and useless as a rock.
Rocks aren't that useless, I mean like... I have plenty of reasons.
1. They can kill people
2. They can help people
3. They can murder people (it's different)
4. They can be used as a weapon
5. They can assassinate someone
6. They can make a fire... and kill someone in the process
7. You can be the ROCK
8. Rocks can be used as a sacrifice to the gods.
9. They can hurt someone
10. They can violently hurt someone
Yeah
Would it make more sense if I say life is as useless as the color blue, instead of life is as useless as a rock?
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Btw now a days people would probably die from depression more than rocks.
That's like saying a nuke kills more people than a fist, of course the fucking nuke kills more people.
Besides a rock can't move after all whereas depression follows you around everywhere.