Love em

Keep on going :3

Deep sea - It wasn't terrible, but not much happened in it either. The first jump held lots of potential, and the tiny leg flick was pretty okay for some reason. The moves afterwards seemed a little uneventful, as if lacking flair. The use of your arm to do the move doesn't seem too good also, it could be waaay better.

Blueberry pie - Hm, that opener wasn't too good looking. That kick you did on the ground did manage to put you in the air for like, a millimeter, but it looked bad. The speed gain was cool, and the kick wasn't bad either. But the manip. Dang, you shouldn't bang your head to uke like that. Looks rather unclean and messy. The spin punch and kick weren't bad. Quite good average actually. The skeet was okay, not exactly my kind of skeet though.

Lots of room for improvement, but you seem like you could do better replays. You seem rather floaty most of the time in your replays though, you might want to do something about that.

Thank you for the constructive CnC spry, i will keep this in mind as soon as i get back.

Well, I would be very thankfull if you actually told me how To improve as that is basicly what this thread is for.

Now i am back, i got school and shiz tommorow so i won't be very active.

This is a WIP i have been working on, please CnC on it so that i can edit the bad early parts out before i finish it.

That is not the CnC i was looking for, i want more detail in what part is bad and what part is good. Thanks anyways.

The parkour one was excellent, kept fluid motion, but lacked action.
You should have completed the course, but it is a WIP.


I didn't see the other one yet... O.o

No, because i needed to see what flaws there were in it before i kept on, i will keep up on it now.

thx, i'm pretty stuck in that replay atm so i decided to make a madman thing.

Yes, i know about that standing still thing xD it was basicly me trying to get the skeet right after 50 tries. pose was hard too because of the momentum plus i suck at classic gravity.

thx for the feedback!