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A new Replay Maker approaches [Jaxonia]
Hello Replay Makers!
Today I decided I would learn to do something I have always loved and wanted to do forever. Replay making. I have a replay made, which is my first replay. Some practice if you will. I am looking for some critiquing and helpful hints. It's been a goal of mine to make replays, and now I have started. Hate comments are allowed, but if they are not helpful, such as simply saying 'I'm shit,' I will simply ask you to leave my thread
Last edited by Jaxon; Mar 2, 2015 at 02:50 AM.
Originally Posted by SruX
the opener had a lot of potential but for the most part it was very sloppy and not fluid try getting closer to uke b4 dismembering him
Alrighty. I'll work with this replay and try something else.
Originally Posted by Bloomedia
Work on your speed and balance more, Dming isnt an issue AS OF NOW.
I expect gr8 things from you, sir.
You have more faith in me then I do. This is good.
I'm just gamin' man
Originally Posted by tully3
yeah, practice what CombatBot said. you need some fluidity in it. but good overall.
You don't even make replays :<
Anyways, I worked a bit on my speed here in this next replay. It's a simple split kick. I'll work on some combos tommorow. I'm done for tonight. I think I'll go play some quick TK to help.
Here ya go
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Edit: Took your advice combat. This helps me a great deal. I edited my first replay and here is what I got using your tip. Its nothing special, just a kick resembling yours.
Last edited by Jaxon; Feb 21, 2015 at 06:31 AM.
I'm just gamin' man
Originally Posted by donkabots
you're replay are pretty good for someone that is just starting, but I recommend you look at other replays from outstanding replay makers (largekilla - swexx) and try to incorporate what makes their replays so good. You want to avoid being stiff and it will look a lot better.
Thanks random white belt.
I'm just gamin' man
