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[VID] Impact Sparring




What is Impact Sparring?



Replays from Omega90, Pr0ne, YoungSandm, Mocucha, Zephira, Rcrichman, J5R12500, Victor4554, T0RIOBABY, obg

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Last edited by matarika; Mar 7, 2015 at 09:31 AM.
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glad you used the same shader everyone was complaining about only a few days ago.

why do ppl think clothes sound like this or w.e thats supposed to be

1:07

what happened to the dojo of matafu
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

It's funny how u guys thought this was an edit lol xD yeah don't expect to see flashy effects and CC cuz I mean that's like expecting CGI special effects from a state Farm commercial. Goodness xD I used an easy effect (slow and speed up time), used many Shaders because as long as u see the fighters clearly. And the sound effects were ones I like so I chose them. Why do ya think imma just do or use something I don't personally like. And why do u think this is like any other edit? Like gosh tryna promote an idea (impact sparring) not enter a best editor contest. That was the issue with matafu. I was tryna promote an idea that actually was a good one (just poorly executed.) But you guys targeted the video since the idea was decent. That's equivalent to targeting a the way a commercial was made. I mean it's delivering something, don't judge the package.
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Ehhh, I'm not really sure about this

I have no problem about the shaders, the shaders would actually have fitted the whole upbeat music thingy quite well imo

However

The CC is kinda crap, no offence or anything.

Intro/outro does not fit Toribash as you're editing it at all, animating some simple shapes would have been far more effective and interesting.

I'm not sure why you decided to change up the style of editing for the final replay, if you wanted to give the video some variety you could have at least made a few of the earlier edits somewhat similar. Right now it just looks like you're trying to get some variety but you're not really getting anywhere with it

I think it would look better if you showed a fraction of each spar rather than the entire length, this way it would actually look like you're giving a sneak peak of what's to come instead of just giving it away; it kinda ruins the suspense. Promotional videos are supposed to make people excited to see the final product(s), rather than give them an entire thingy to watch

You went overboard with the sound effects. Yes, they can add to the video if done well. However, it doesn't really fit in well with this kind of song, plus you more or less spammed the sounds everywhere. I mean yeah it's a personal preference but it kind of overpowers the video if you know what I mean, I spent more time focusing on the sounds than the actual clips/song because any time you sped the video up all I could hear was wind

The sound effects at 1:15-1:18 get a little better for a while because I can actually distinguish between them
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See that's what I need. Good Cnc Thanks dude. See its possible to say what I did wrong, did right and what to do next time. All in one Cnc. While respecting someone's personal choices and ideas. Rather than just chewing up, spitting out and stepping on my opinion and shoving yours down my throat. I'd rather not be Cnc raped thank you very much.
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Yeah the sounds are too loud and distorted.

Try making them a bit quiter or remove them for good.

Other than that the video looks cool 8/10
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Originally Posted by matarika View Post
It's funny how u guys thought this was an edit lol xD yeah don't expect to see flashy effects and CC cuz I mean that's like expecting CGI special effects from a state Farm commercial. Goodness xD I used an easy effect (slow and speed up time), used many Shaders because as long as u see the fighters clearly. And the sound effects were ones I like so I chose them. Why do ya think imma just do or use something I don't personally like. And why do u think this is like any other edit? Like gosh tryna promote an idea (impact sparring) not enter a best editor contest. That was the issue with matafu. I was tryna promote an idea that actually was a good one (just poorly executed.) But you guys targeted the video since the idea was decent. That's equivalent to targeting a the way a commercial was made. I mean it's delivering something, don't judge the package.

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST DO I NEED TO DO THIS THE THIRD TIME.
OK

My post from about a week or two ago is here:

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Some moments in this post that still hold up
Originally Posted by imaslayaa
So, everytime you've been given cnc, you fucking ignore it then claim "hurr it's a *showreel/advertisement/test* I shouldn't have to do that hurr"

Originally Posted by imaslayaa

the cnc I gave "you and you don't use ink(toris) the same color as the backround when making the book"

This video
The cnc you've been given.
"I agree with Tyzi that shader is hard to look at its too bright and some of the clips suffered because of it(white joints+brightshader=bad)The tori seemed lost in some scenes white background and the shader taking the shading off of the tori"

oh hey, where's his uper body?



oh by the way, don't use sounds, they're fucking horrible, stop trying to be mocucha.
smh
Originally Posted by imaslayaa View Post
oh by the way, don't use sounds, they're fucking horrible, stop trying to be mocucha.
smh

I don't see why everyone keeps saying this. I mean you don't see people going all "OMG WTF STOP WITH THAT STYLE WITHOUT THE CC AND FUNNY REPLAYS STOP TRYING TO BE OLD SCHOOL" or "THE HELL ARE YOU DOING WITH THIS OVEREDITED PIECE OF CRAP STOP COPYING SLY AND HOURS AND HUMPER AND SOFDNOISJADNALKSJDNLSFNDKMFSG"

yeah
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Originally Posted by Augans View Post
people do that all the time lol and most of the time theyre right
"made an oldschool edit" "stop trying to be oldschool its just bad editing"
and im pretty sure people try to copy sly and someone even had a frame from one of his videos as their avatar

Yes but in this case from what I can see imaslayaa has been hating on every single one of the vids, usually people just give up after one or two
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