Stand of Flow try not to kick off the ground like that I understand why you did it but try not too.

spins of grace try to utilize your neck joint more


in the last one night has awaken
that was great again try to use the neck joint more and be careful of twitching it

all three had instances were you twitched but your flow is amazing it you could learn to use your neck better and gain more momentum you'd be set

and don't go back and change the replays
keeps them and study them so you have something to go off of
over all though amazing work.

and remember no one is perfect so if some says "it's amazing flawless" then either they want you to fail or really don't care. keep it up!

Thank you I'll post more Later On and I'll take what you said into consideration

I will do a different one but look at the trick itself
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No CnC?

CnC and tell me what you personally think

The first replay was much better in my opinion. The movement looks very good. Sweet showcase of your skills

Awwww...thank you babe

I hope I please someone

Looks good man! The only think I don't like are the twitches like with the knees and the neck. The combos looks good and they're nicely put together. Keep making more!

im a perfectionist most of the time, so some of these things are probably me nitpicking

backflip 1: it's accepted that backflips are stiff because you don't need to do much to perform one. perfect

backflip 2: i dont know if it's just my perfectionism, but usually i want my backflips to be symmetrical. otherwise they just look weird to me.

backflip 3: now this one is a little wonky to me. the fact that your toes end up behind the previous position of your heels in 3 frames says that you kept on contracting after liftoff, which is fine as long as your feet are flat. unfortunately this was not the case, and your heels lifted off the ground to long before the initial liftoff. of course you want to "jump with your toes," but this does not mean you have to stand on your toes while you lift your arms.

another thing: your legs. this is probably a nitpick, but unless you're doing a backlayout, or a x-out, usually you should keep your legs tucked, and then extend them when your torso is nearly parallel to the ground. otherwise the backflip is going to look wonky. (wonky? lol. this doesnt apply if your legs are extended enough to land good, like in the second backflip, however this is stiff.)

corkscrew 1: nitpick warning: normally you want your corks to be directed upward, not flying to the right or left. also: ghooosting D: (frame 1052). fixable by just raising your arm.

scoot 1: normally using your hand(s) to land is frowned upon when tricking (atleast it used to). however i do not frown upon this if a recovery is made (such as a scoot or a trick is made immediately afterwards). this is a good example of a recovery, so good job.

corkscrew 2: perfect. just perfect.

missleg 1: nothing's bad about this

i have no idea what to call this next trick: i dunno wat to say about this. the spring would usually break a man's leg from that much jump, but this isn't really frowned upon. so yea. now, however, remember when i said using hand(s) to aid a landing? well i won't say this isn't bad but it isn't pretty unless as i said: it's a recovery or an immediate trick.

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