Toribash
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[VID] Loney and Cold
Hello,

There is my new video about Xlr84life.



Music :
Gramatik - Lonely and Cold

Soft used :
Fraps, Sony Vegas pro 11
Last edited by Mocucha; Apr 23, 2015 at 04:14 PM.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

Originally Posted by Fr4me View Post
cnc m8

Too much bluring. Thats the only thing i got so far.
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and btw. I comment at the vid where the blur i think should be removed

I will probably not remove it, but yeah, you are right, the blut at that moment is too loud, I think I will reduce it.

Originally Posted by Lotramus View Post
Without any cc before and after the transitions after 1:20 it looks like a salty crisp was slapped onto a sweet cherry cake.
Also about the ice transition, it would look better with cracks.
Else it was a nice video.

I'm not sure to understand the part with the sweet cherry cake >_>

Originally Posted by Augans View Post
just dont do the ice transition
dont use the overlay if it looks bad

you abused the shine effect a lot

I can't really say how the overlay will be before the rendering, that is why I do wips. I will keep the ice transition, but the challenge now is making them looking good. Any idea about it ?

When you talk about shine effect, I guess you talk about the one used during madman/manips replays ?


Thanks for reply and constructive cristicisms ;)

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

Really cool wip, I enjoyed it more than the previous ones,
but like the others have said, the blurs were really annoying, I think those should go.
I hardly noticed the ice transitions, so it's fine with me, but others have suggestion otherwise, I can't think of a better way though.
Also the brightness in the 2 manips were annoying.
I love the cutting during the parkour scenes, it removes the boring parts and makes it a more interesting.
Like the last replay, I actually didn't want that replay to be in the video, but the way you editted it makes it look better and I actually like it ;)
Parkour like you've never seen before:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=423045
For the ice transitions, actually I am doing some try with "broken ice" effects on it to make it more entertaining.

When you say the blurs are annoying, in wich way ? Are they too loud, missplaced, both ?

I hardly reduced the light effect during manip replays.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

Really enjoyed this as always, really good work at showcasing Xlr84life's replays. Your music choice was great as ever too.

I was wondering if you've tried using expertcam yet? I think it would work really well with your smooth, relatively unedited style.

Also, with the ice transitions, I've had some thoughts. Maybe fade in the ice while the camera is decelerating from moving really fast to a standstill, and then fade out the ice while the camera starts moving again. This could give more of impression of the screen freezing-over? You could combine this with turning up a blurring effect on the image behind the ice as it's freezing, to give the impression of increasing refraction through the ice - again making it feel like the screen's freezing-over. I think those transitions could look really sweet. Sorry if that explanation didn't make much sense - it's quite hard to explain what I mean in words. I can elaborate some more if it's unclear :)

I look forward to seeing the finished product :)
Last edited by Moop; Apr 22, 2015 at 11:18 AM.
one time i had a hair deep in my urethra and when i pulled it out it felt kinda good ~fudgiebalz 2020


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<~Skul> if you kill one in front of the rest, they'll scatter and leave
holy cow what bitrate is the mp3 you used

i think the main problem with this video lies in the quality of the music before even starting with the video
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Moop : I prefer to stay with the normal keyframing for that video, I will do tests with in a video just made for that ;)

Tyzi : Well, I took the song in high quality... 1080p

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash