Because why not?

Half of us are in school, half of us aren't - there's a lot of knowledge that could be shared. If you're having difficulty with some shit that teachers are making you do, then come here to ask for help.. someone should be able to help you.

This is a member and ally-only service. Unless you want to pay us...

I'd do peoples homework for money only. I got enough on my own I need to PAY to do. send 5usd to my paypal and I'll do hw.

shit
my math teacher got me to answer a question
it's very hard, and will be on our test coming up in 5 days.
can someone please tell me how to work out addition? ._____.

Please Donkey, don't disrupt other students' learning.

protons fuck yea

So start researching it. What type of essay is it? Persuasive, analytical, expository? First thing you should to is create a 'skeleton'/structure of your essay, listing the main point that you want to get across with each paragraph. Your introduction should highlight those main points, and your conclusion should sum them up.
e.g.

Introduction:
Snazzy opener, list stated objective/aims of essay, discuss how you will meet those aims
Para 1:
Point X
Para 2:
Point Y
Para 3:
Point Z
Conclusion:
Recap aims listed in introduction, summarise how you met them by covering points X, Y +Z, end with a thoughtful closing statement

Not really much I can help you with other than structure for an essay. I assume you're capable of researching the topic yourself. Within each paragraph you should have a topic sentence (your point) and evidence/examples proving your point.

Good job, although it's typically not advisable to include questions in your essay (like at the end of your introduction), though I dunno if your teacher asks for that sort of thing.

Yeah, use less emotive language and more academic language. You shouldn't be using '!' ever in a history essay. Just before the conclusion, you switched to 1st person and said 'I feel'.. You shouldn't ever, unless they say otherwise, write in 1st person during an essay. This has to do with academic language again.

There's ways to state your opinion and attempt to persuade people that it's right without using 1st person. The person reading the essay knows that the opinion is your own, so you don't need to tell them that 'I think blah blah'. You'd start off your essay by stating your opinion as fact, and then you'd explain to the reader why it is a fact/why my hypothesis is true. Then in your actual body paragraphs, you'd break down each of those reasons/justifications.