Originally Posted by bgjames1

ok so another note is that manipulations or manip's should not be grabbed in replays although you have the opener,the momentum and the hits you still must make a smooth hit on uke ~bg

Originally Posted by Theee

not that bad, but it needs to be faster and smoother overall.

the manip could have been a bit longer imo.

and about that "not grabbing in manips" there are some grabbing-manips that are really awesome , but thats a lot harder to make than without grabbing.

Originally Posted by bgjames1

nice one it was clean and nice punch to get the decap nice pose too you improved from some time like to see more of you

Originally Posted by GrAmOf0n

That was actually pretty nice.

So yeah. The opener was nice. Really simple and it did the job. Your right arm was a tiny bit stiff(now that is just pure nitpicking ain't it?)
The part after the opener was really smooth. Loved it.
Also, the way you began your manip was really nice.
I didn't quite like how you smacked uke's leg with your hand. But then again, I see that you used that move to speed uke up a bit. However, you didn't make him spin as much.
Decap was nice. Simple and straight to the point.
All in all, really nice replay. I hoped to see more spins in it though.
Cheers!