the manip looks like you are chasing uke, try to stay closer to uke (do /opt tori 0 and look if uke is not flying randomly and then do /opt uke 0 and look if tori flows well).
the dms are kinda boring because you didnt chance the grab and the only non-grab dm was the decap, so yea try to mess around with the grabs and maybe ungrab sometimes.
overall pretty nice especially the last hit