Toribash
opener is a bit too generic.

the transition to the first punch after the spin was too slow for my taste.

the manip was alright, you always changed the dircetion in that you spinned uke and there was a lack of movement in the transitions from one hit to the other.

didnt like that you grabed before dm'ing uke, but its ok if you get a nice 3-4 dm then (imo).

But nice replay overall
Pidda's spirit animal
Originally Posted by xHaxx View Post
:< why u do dis thee

sowwy .-.

anyway your new replay is pretty good, but the two things bothers me
the first thing is the decap, its not clean at all you hit the neck right with your chin which isnt so cool ( would have been awesome if you decap him with your knee ).
2nd thing is that you grabed after manipulating him a bit and then just went for dms (maybe try to switch grabs or only use a grab for like 3-4 frames ).
Pidda's spirit animal
Originally Posted by ArmSpazz View Post
So..I can just SHARE my replays here? O:

make your own tread lil bro
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Originally Posted by Theee View Post
sowwy .-.

anyway your new replay is pretty good, but the two things bothers me
the first thing is the decap, its not clean at all you hit the neck right with your chin which isnt so cool ( would have been awesome if you decap him with your knee ).
2nd thing is that you grabed after manipulating him a bit and then just went for dms (maybe try to switch grabs or only use a grab for like 3-4 frames ).

ok
i will do it sir
Last edited by Love; Jun 17, 2015 at 09:36 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Originally Posted by GrAmOf0n View Post
Heyo.

Alright. Twc opener. Cool cool.
I didn't quite like how you bumped Uke with your fist after the opener. It seemed rather unnecessary. And you bruised your head shortly after. :C
Hook kick was nice. You could have gotten more out of it if you aimed a lil' bit better though, but it's ok as it is.
Decap was interesting, as it happened so quickly. I don't know...I liked it.
Last kick was ok. Again, you could have gotten a bigger boom if you aimed a bit better, but it's still one hell of a kick.
Transition to pose, and pose itself were quite odd.

All in all, neat lil' replay.
Your DMs are quite good.
Cheers!

thx sir :^{D