BUMP!

Alright, thanks MrJingles.

Bump!

sunset one is the replay I cnc for you today
I liked the opener, the fact that you took time before going to uke with the spins and getting on your feel in the air and hands on the ground was pretty sweet. However I would've liked more if you continued spins on the ground instead of taking off and going to the moon. At this point the replay gets kinda like "does he have time to actually kill uke?" The decap was okay but it seemed like you struggled a bit in the air which wasn't very nice. Done.

thank you!

Forgot about this thread. XD Here is another replay kinda rusty

3 new replays for y'all!

MORE REPLAYS!
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Bootiful replay ;o;

ok CnC time

ok so revolution: Opener was pretty slow and generic not much style or creativity. I also see you kicking with your shin a lot that's a no no you always want to kick with your foot. as for the dms you are kinda all over the place and just curious what is the dm thresh at? you need to work on your creativity get some ideas and your execution plus the flow of the replay. Its also a little to grabby.

In the jungle: the opener has been used a lot its ok but when you kicked uke then contracted that knee really fast looks bad. that first kick was ok but you were kinda twitchy. i didn't like that slap punch thing that you did but its ok. so still work on execution and flow.

Frenzy: Same opener as the last one. you want to create different openers for each replay. you have to determine your own style and if you use the same opener you cant figure out your style. i didn't like that you grabbed before the dm and you were upside down and it just looked awkward. when you change your chest rotation a lot it can be really twitchy plus it makes you seem undeceive so try and not do that so much. again your pretty twitchy and you need to work on your creativity.

Freak: same opener again, but this time i like your followup a lot better. the first kick was ok. that punch was okay. your movement is still twitchy. you could have gotten a couple more dms on that kick and ok decap.

so some overall advice, work on your style and your ideas for replays. don't do the same opener and just be creative. keep trying man.

more replays CnC please!