Toribash
Oooh~ Awesome opener, it seemed a bit slow but it did look great, so no complaints. After that, the way you kicked off the manip part was pretty cool imo - hitting both the leg and the arm to flip uke was a nice thought. Then after you carry uke... God knows how far... You were a little shaky just before your first kick, but that was outshined by the destruction that shortly followed. The dms looked effortless in their execution, which I'm almost certain is a good thing.
5:

nice spins
i notice that the ankles were pretty much extended for the whole replay
not sure how i feel about how that right arm stayed raised at around 170
why'd you make the replay prematurely end
nice decap
ok pose
5 - Well, there isn't a whole lot to CnC, but it's all around pretty solid.

6 - That's a really funky opener xD It was unique though, and it didn't look bad. A good start to the replay imo. The split was nice, but the decap not quite as nice. I would have maybe wanted to see you either more upright when you kicked, or I would have wanted to see the knee on the leg you weren't kicking with contracted, both for the aim of enunciating the kick that decapped.
Thank you guys!

Here's a little replay I haven't been much creative lately so here's a decap of some kind.
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Cast Away.rpl (430.2 KB, 78 views)
sleepy
Weird opener, nice spins, nice manipulation. Expected more then a decab.

Gj, 9/10
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Thank you guys (: really appreciated.

Originally Posted by Nagato9757 View Post


oh, and you're in my video btw

Also thanks Nagato for getting the chance to be in your videos I viewed both of them they look really nice means alot, thank you!
sleepy
Cata
The opener was stiff, ugly and generic.
The spin-launch off the floor was nice.
The second launch was okay, but I didn't like how you had your left arm in the air for 30 frames, and then swapped over to the right one for 40...
Also, I don't like how you froze in the air just before landing back onto the floor at around 140.
I think you also could of gone for more than a decap, but it still looks nice.
Good effort.
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