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[VID] Jisse - Let It Die
Hello,

Jisse is back in this new video !

Final version.



Replay maker : Jisse

Soft used : Sony vegas pro, Fraps

Music : Starset - Let It Die
Last edited by Mocucha; Sep 25, 2015 at 06:08 PM.

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I think that the cc for the last two replays can be changed a bit

It's a bit too bright and even though I understand what you're trying to do I think you should tone it down a bit, change the colour to blue or something like that. It just doesn't fit imo
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woo cool vid there and you shoused a good music :c make me want to watch it a bunch of times again.
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It's just no one usues my shit .
Thanks for reactions

I tried to improve the cc and I put effects that I had in mind. New wip.

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Mocuchaaa im buying after effects and priemier pro during christmas, maybe we could collab eventually? :d
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Some parts looked a little off sync

The camera movement was a bit boring

I didn't like the effect at around 1:50

Other than that I like it, you should use a few overlays but not as many as you did before (A bit of snow or something like that)
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please do me a favor and work on your velocity, jesus.
you need to work on these basic things before working on bells and whistles, overlays, effects, etc.
it's been over 3 years and you still haven't developed your own style of editing. you've strayed away from making kung fu movies or whatever, and now they're just a mess.

look at some old videos, that's what you're going for. look at those who did the whole "montage" thing right like moop, skulfuk, warcry, muffindo, macperfect, or tyme who set the bar for the time period, which imo you still fall below in terms of even the basics of putting a video together. what's the point in learning how to use cool overlays and using effects with your sync if you can't even use velocity or pan/crop to make a video fit a song you choose?

you can look into newer videos for what i mean on fitting the song with flow, like sly, skip, humper, emdicox, etc.

tl;dr: get some structure on what you're doing, nothing really goes well together.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

If you are talking about the parkours part, it is already fixed. Big words for little things.

I already noticed that the velocity was wrong in some parts and some effects are missing, but this time I work differently on my video : I first do replays, then fix things.


"it's been over 3 years and you still haven't developed your own style of editing"

I disagree with that, but yeah, it is your opinion, thanks to share it.
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Final version uploaded.
Last edited by Mocucha; Sep 25, 2015 at 06:08 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump

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Originally Posted by Mocucha View Post
If you are talking about the parkours part, it is already fixed. Big words for little things.

I already noticed that the velocity was wrong in some parts and some effects are missing, but this time I work differently on my video : I first do replays, then fix things.


"it's been over 3 years and you still haven't developed your own style of editing"

I disagree with that, but yeah, it is your opinion, thanks to share it.
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Final version uploaded.

no. i'm talking about the whole thing. your flashes aren't keyframed, and i didn't say effects are missing. you can't NOT work on replays first, you have to record it. what i meant was your velocity is always constant and doesn't change at all, it doesn't match the song and there isn't a whole lot of sync where there really could be.

maybe it's because your english is lacking that you can't grasp the point i'm trying to make in any video i talk about, and people tell me not to cnc because you don't understand
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

"it's been over 3 years and you still haven't developed your own style of editing"

"no. i'm talking about the whole thing. your flashes aren't keyframed, and i didn't say effects are missing. you can't NOT work on replays first, you have to record it. what i meant was your velocity is always constant and doesn't change at all, it doesn't match the song and there isn't a whole lot of sync where there really could be."

I'm not sure to understand everything, because as you said my english suck, but I think it is my style, you love it or not, but it is. I don't focus on effects on every hits during the music but the general mood. In this case "Let It Die", I let it die. Did you seen it ? Did you felt it ?

My flashes aren't keyframed ? Really, I don't understand that point and the rest, could you explain it to me ? In general, each of my effects are done frames by frames.

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