Nah, the way you colored it is just weird, specially on the elbow pads, I can see some white parts in there.
Also, my main color is not silver, it's a white. Pure's white.

Coolio, PM me if you have any question about the avatar.

He doesn't have an eyebrow! No. I'm not going to change the payment. Never.
<-- No eyebrow!

Also continue please, bad80.

I think you should definitely give him a price bump for adding in half-assed flames to your coloring book assignment.


(This is a joke, I'm so sorry).

This part is ugly:
The white under the eyebrow is something I dont like. Look, The white line, it's weird.

No, thank you.

It's really clear and cool. Go for it.

The white part looks a little bit pixeled/unsmooth. Could you fix it?

This part is weird:


I can't clearly see the flame.
The eye is wrong! Look at this:

There is no white in there. Fix it. /dl and /lp my tori for more details!

Also this shit looks fat:

Make it thinner.

There is a white and skin color around here
Itu garis garis item yang didalam matanya kalo gak pas jangan dipaksain kaya yang ini: Yang kiri terlalu maksa.


Coba buat flamenya, lu gambar sesuai yang ada digambar Azion.
Abis itu Opacitynya lu kecilin, bagusan gitu daripada bikin pake brush atau apapun itu. Flamenya jadi keliatan gajelas.