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[Tex] a cute happy looking guy

It's been a long time since i make a head (not that i am good to begin with tho')So..CnC please and give me an advice how to improve my art skill

P.S. The program i used is GIMP
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pretty good try adding a bit more shadow where the face and hair meet up unless that was the effect u were going for
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if you look closely..there is a shadow where the face and hair meet up
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Originally Posted by robbystyle View Post
Cute. I like it.
^-^

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Originally Posted by Demon View Post
you don't want to be letting advice just roll off of your back, even if you don't like it

ah..i misread it as "there is no shadow", i am sorry Kirito
and thanks for reminding me Demon

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Cute, is that furiuchi?

nope, it just a random guy that i think of
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cool hair, awful face.

the mouth looks so out of place. it's like it could be on the same head with a different facial expression. ^_^ only looks ok in text, should look a bit happier

there's a large portion of blank space inbetween the eyes and the mouth, maybe fill it with some type of shadows or nose?
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Nice colors. Try to get rid of the sharp edges that are transitioning from gray to baby blue. Try blurring it, or smudging it so it blends.

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Originally Posted by TyZi View Post
cool hair, awful face.

the mouth looks so out of place. it's like it could be on the same head with a different facial expression. ^_^ only looks ok in text, should look a bit happier

there's a large portion of blank space inbetween the eyes and the mouth, maybe fill it with some type of shadows or nose?

hmm..i always had trouble on how to put shadow or nose, any advice?

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Nice colors. Try to get rid of the sharp edges that are transitioning from gray to baby blue. Try blurring it, or smudging it so it blends.

thanks for the feedback
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Btw since I also notcied this just now, are you wanting the eyes to be that elevated on the face? Because If you're going for a more human style, proportion of the face's eyes are slightly descended when compared to your art here. Same with mouth, it seems very low and close to the chin. But that's just me. It looks fine honestly how it is. Just see how it looks if you try that. See what you think is best.


Basically going on with TyZi here. (Had this typed before reading his).
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nah it was intended, but for the mouth..yeah i just notice it that it's ttt low thank you
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