Toribash
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[VID] Trestet - Holdin on
Hello community,

There is my new video about Trestet :



Soft used :

Sony Vegas pro 11
Fraps

Music :

Flume - Holdin On (Hermitude Remix)

Comments are welcome
Last edited by Mocucha; Nov 29, 2015 at 11:26 PM.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

super cheesecakey jumpcuts to the same few frames. it's bad.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Glitchy ? Choppy ? Cheesecakey ?

Wtf are you talking about ? Sorry but I don't get these words.

My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash

the jump cuts were simply un enjoyable, not a better way to phrase it really. They did not serve any purpose in my opinion. They did not create a glitchy tech feel, and at the same time it killed the flow. Id remove all of them and keep the flow.
i didn't really liked the way it repeat/glitch in some parts.
the overlay seems ok for me.
the keyframing looks great.
and the text-tracking-tori on the beggining looked cool.
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Originally Posted by Mocucha View Post
Glitchy ? Choppy ? Cheesecakey ?

Wtf are you talking about ? Sorry but I don't get these words.

"wtf we meant" was the only thing you even made as far as effects go and aren't just ripped off some overlay website is bad.
it's cheesy, and looks god awful. if anything it's annoying.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

I really didn't like the part where it kept repeating the same thing over and over. The overlay was really nice this time though.

Me being edgy TRIGGER WARNING

Last edited by Glimpsed; Nov 24, 2015 at 07:53 AM.
Glimpsed
I think the jump cuts were a bit......ott. I would have maybe also used a variety of fps (high and slowmo). The repeats were't as good as I thought but I would love to see it re-vamped and finished!
*Pulls more tail then a special needs child at the petting zoo*
pretty bad imo. jumpcuts are shoddy, stevo would be fucking disappointed smh
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smh imo omg wasn't choppy enough
smh imo/10

But really
I didn't enjoy one bit of it, too much jumpcuts for my taste fam.
Last edited by mused; Nov 24, 2015 at 05:03 PM. Reason: cheek
sleepy