the jump cuts were simply un enjoyable, not a better way to phrase it really. They did not serve any purpose in my opinion. They did not create a glitchy tech feel, and at the same time it killed the flow. Id remove all of them and keep the flow.
i didn't really liked the way it repeat/glitch in some parts.
the overlay seems ok for me.
the keyframing looks great.
and the text-tracking-tori on the beggining looked cool.
Wtf are you talking about ? Sorry but I don't get these words.
"wtf we meant" was the only thing you even made as far as effects go and aren't just ripped off some overlay website is bad.
it's cheesy, and looks god awful. if anything it's annoying.
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up
I think the jump cuts were a bit......ott. I would have maybe also used a variety of fps (high and slowmo). The repeats were't as good as I thought but I would love to see it re-vamped and finished!
*Pulls more tail then a special needs child at the petting zoo*