lil' banter here
the repeats/jumpcuts:
the jumpcuts were fine imo
the repeats at 0:22-0:24 were a bit different from the rest of them, since these didn't actually end with whatever came next in the replay. its like you combined a jumpcut with the last repeat. makes me think that there might've been more to that replay.
the repeats overall are awful imo. i mean yeah, the song repeats itself, but that doesnt mean you have to do it every time it has those repeating sessions. like you didn't do the jumpcuts in the beginning repeatedly did you? those were more tolerable because they werent done over and over in the video.
instead of repeating the clip over and over again when the song starts repeating itself, do the speed up and slow down thing like skypepro said. just not too much to where it's annoying.
or maybe you can sync some of the hits with the repeats. that'd be smoother.
you dont have to do it on every repeated word. maybe wait a word, then do whatever effect you want to do, wait a word, etc
also: at 1:13 those repeats looked better than all the rest. just pointing that out
the overlays:
i think the overlays for the most part were fine. the overlay at 1:01-1:26 is questionable however
the glow around the toris didn't really fit in yeah?
other effects
the toris lose quality when they start lighting up at 0:41-0:58
dont you think you couldve just left the replay at normal speed, (0:56), since it is short anyways?
the thing at 1:20 was cool. maybe when that effect is over, perhaps shake the tori left to right a bit to have the illusion that they united back?
in all honesty, you should really focus on the replays themselves, without ruining their flow. if the majority of the video is trying to show how cool the effects are instead of how cool the replays are then what's the point?
this song is rather hard to work with, so good luck.
i'd suggest starting from scratch tho buddy :c
Last edited by Tsuion; Nov 27, 2015 at 05:06 AM.
Originally Posted by Ancient
most people on this thread don't have English as their native language, and no one said anything about mocucha's spelling
Buddy buddy buddy, I fucking said, "SOMEONE is going to complain". Saying so in advance, because the post by Mocucha above mine was a grammar Nazi's living hell.
Tsuion, I agree with a lot of that. I don't think he should start entirely from scratch, he has nice transitioning, and the overlay is good for the first part in my opinion. I really appreciate that more than just a couple of us know how to right out an informative criticizing post that will actually be taken into consideration. (A not too everyone raging about his "I don't take shit into consideration," he meant he doesn't take shitty CNC into consideration, for those of you narrow-minded children who didn't catch on to that.)
Originally Posted by SkypePro
So this doesn't get removed for "Useless Posting" I am going to make another point about the video:
The transitions between replays are extremely bright, regarding your opinion, it might look better with a little less brightness too it? Other than that, this video falls together neatly. Looking forward to the finished video
You are right, the transitions are too brightness, I already fixed that point.
Originally Posted by Ancient
also, for mocucha that video was, i can't even describe it in words. i'm not being mean to you, but those 'lensflares' were annoying as fuck, and not a good choice of song. also, this is all rigged gg no re wp
Wich lensflares are you talking about ?
For the music... I think it is impossible to chose a music that 100% of people love it.
Originally Posted by Astral
Mocu, the spar is too long without any effect, maybe you can do hmmm... you know? That effect.
I'm not sure to understand what do you want to mean...
Originally Posted by Tsuion
the repeats/jumpcuts:
the jumpcuts were fine imo
the repeats at 0:22-0:24 were a bit different from the rest of them, since these didn't actually end with whatever came next in the replay. its like you combined a jumpcut with the last repeat. makes me think that there might've been more to that replay.
the repeats overall are awful imo. i mean yeah, the song repeats itself, but that doesnt mean you have to do it every time it has those repeating sessions. like you didn't do the jumpcuts in the beginning repeatedly did you? those were more tolerable because they werent done over and over in the video.
instead of repeating the clip over and over again when the song starts repeating itself, do the speed up and slow down thing like skypepro said. just not too much to where it's annoying.
or maybe you can sync some of the hits with the repeats. that'd be smoother.
you dont have to do it on every repeated word. maybe wait a word, then do whatever effect you want to do, wait a word, etc
also: at 1:13 those repeats looked better than all the rest. just pointing that out
the overlays:
i think the overlays for the most part were fine. the overlay at 1:01-1:26 is questionable however
the glow around the toris didn't really fit in yeah?
other effects
the toris lose quality when they start lighting up at 0:41-0:58
dont you think you couldve just left the replay at normal speed, (0:56), since it is short anyways?
the thing at 1:20 was cool. maybe when that effect is over, perhaps shake the tori left to right a bit to have the illusion that they united back?
in all honesty, you should really focus on the replays themselves, without ruining their flow. if the majority of the video is trying to show how cool the effects are instead of how cool the replays are then what's the point?
this song is rather hard to work with, so good luck.
i'd suggest starting from scratch tho buddy :c
I'm still searching for something to replace the jumpcuts, actually I don't find something better...
For the glow around the toris, it look some bad because of my rendering settings (same for fps that fall in some parts, I need to render in 32bits colors + make more fps), I'm still trying to improve that.
In general, and that is the main thematic of my channel, I focus on the replays, not on the effects (except for some videos), but I still try to remove bad parts of replays.
Last edited by Mocucha; Nov 28, 2015 at 12:47 PM.
My Youtube channel : Mocucha Toribash
https://youtu.be/G_vLVoNmQig?t=23s https://youtu.be/Dm3h4-anH9Q?t=2s
he means this, although i wouldn't doube it if you can't understand a video showing exactly what it is either.
this requires you to be a little more creative than jump cuts too, which makes this effect a double "not happening"
he means this, although i wouldn't doube it if you can't understand a video showing exactly what it is either.
this requires you to be a little more creative than jump cuts too, which makes this effect a double "not happening"
Originally Posted by Kaneki333
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up
