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At the moment I'm more interested in Zwifts.
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Yes it is still open, but I'm very partial to Zwift right now. So you would have to make something to turn my eyes away from that and at this point if you take too long I'll end up going with zwift if he finishes soon.
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WIP

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Kinda what K0HTA said. I will always be interested in the absolute best, so if you have a really good idea and you get something good going, make sure to post WIPs to show us.

I'll look at the art and stuff in a bit. Just quickly passing by.
Originally Posted by xxGangstaxx View Post

WIP


The first one is kinda interesting, but the background overpowers the text way to much, also it doesn't really fit the theme we're going for. Good work though, looks pretty cool.
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I've tried using your theme that you wanted. I've came up with this as a wip

Wip

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Its better and interesting, but I'm still way more partial to Zwift's.
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I pretty much agree with NiteNite. We really should have thought about this more before we made the request, but honestly I see people using a lot more of the purple than I thought they would. I kinda intended it to be used as a secondary/tertiary colour in regards to importance in the colour scheme. Just something suplementary, ya know
Alright, so I did a bit of experimenting with this and here is what I came up with. I used like a dark grey for the main color, and grayish-purple/grayish-cobalt for the highlights. Tell me if I should continue finishing the other banners off.





















Last edited by Zwift; Dec 20, 2015 at 10:33 PM.
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[3:43:05 PM] Abel: hey guys
[3:43:17 PM] Abel: Zwift wants you to reply to his clan banners
[3:44:01 PM] Lukina: Banners can't talk
[3:44:06 PM] Nicger Shrek (Pouffywall): ^^
[3:51:10 PM] Abel: he seems like he's getting frustrated
[3:51:36 PM] Nicger Shrek (Pouffywall): I'm frustrated that he didn't listen to any of us ;~;
[3:52:04 PM] Nicger Shrek (Pouffywall): I don't even know what to say to him besides quoting everything I've said to him on the last five pages of our request thread
[3:52:11 PM] Abel: well voice your concern on the thread lol


Colour: I don't have a lot of concern about the colour besides a.) I like grey in this context more than I like black/dark grey b.) the variety of purples and blues make it look a little more fruity than our name deserves.

Font: I don't know if you've been paying attention to the things I'm saying to other artists, but I really wish the font were a bit more fluid. As in, one letter leads to the next. I don't think a fully cursive font would be good, but a synthesis between what you have now and a really fluid font like cursive would be great imo. Not sure about other people

Flames:
- Asymmetry is your friend
- Creativity is your friend
- Variety and distinction is your friend
- Don't be afraid to allow the flames to take up space behind the text. It'd make it look a lot more organic and much less linear and mundane.


If I can't make it clear enough STUFF LIKE THIS APPLIES TO EVERYONE ATTEMPTING THE REQUEST (besides the flame bit, that's kinda specific to Zwift).
Last edited by pouffy; Dec 20, 2015 at 11:36 PM.