Your hits aren't that bad but work on your openers. A good way to improve on your openers is to think about what you want to do with it and then think about how you will get to that position and what you need to do. If you don't know what to do, it really shows in your replay.
#A - Fever
This opener really wasn't a bad idea. It was creative and had potential, but the way you paused at the start was kinda strange because it was an ugly position to be in. If you did that falling over thing at the start and kept constant movement, it could have been really cool.
For me, the best part of the replay was after the opener when you grabbed uke and dismembered his abs and chest in the same kick, it's not often you see that. The spin leading up to the kick and the kick itself was also pretty cool.
There was nothing wrong with the transition into the second kick but the way you held your knee after it made it look awkward. Nice pose.
idk why i wrote so much im bored ok
